11-01-2016, 11:57 AM
Very nice. It captures the feel of a relaxing Autumn evening. This part:
was a wonderful way to tie it all up. That last line.
(11-01-2016, 02:51 AM)Kaltes-Herzeleid Wrote: The pony smiled cheerfully, hooves arranging the camera as Nightmare and I slid down to the grass carefully, her partially in my lap, my arms wrapped her and drawing her closer. My chin resting on her head, the familiar scent of her exquisitely soft mane drifting up to me as in a bright flash, our moment was physically immortalized. Just the two of us.
As it was meant to be.
was a wonderful way to tie it all up. That last line.
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The bigger you build the bonfire, the more darkness is revealed.
Every possession and every happiness is but lent by chance for an uncertain time, and may therefore be demanded back the next hour.
The bigger you build the bonfire, the more darkness is revealed.
Every possession and every happiness is but lent by chance for an uncertain time, and may therefore be demanded back the next hour.