03-13-2017, 11:25 PM
(03-11-2017, 10:00 AM)RaptorJesus Wrote: You are the sunshine to my wooded path
the bark to my trees
You are the mist of my foamy rivers
the green to my leaves
You are the warmth of an evening well spent.
(At least, so I believe.)
That's nice, man, I like it. It really shows how beautiful you think she is- nature is always a great comparative in poetry. Comes off as very sincere and reverent.
Alright, here's another one for the sugarhorse:
I know you sometimes doubt
How much I love you
I'm here to put it to rest
And show that my love is true
Have you ever looked into the sky and seen
The clouds envelope the sun?
That is how I shall embrace you, darling
When my Earthly duties are done
Or have you seen the night sky
Shroud the planet in peace?
That's I how shall comfort you, dear
In the future life that does not cease
I know sometimes my eyes do wander
But it only brings me heart aches and pain
Because while others may momentarily catch my sight
It is you and only you I seek to retain
Anytime I feel I've not been true to you
I feel nearly sick inside
And this sickness from being apart from you
I now feel I must not hide
So for any of the moments we've doubted our love
We must hold a steady course
Because the love and devotion within our hearts
Is a powerful, all-conquering force
Powerful enough to hold us together?
Why would you ever doubt it, my sweet?
I swear it is enough to bind us as one
Until all of eternity is complete
So keep your eyes open, my darling
Hold tight to what you know to be true
Because be it tomorrow or 60 years away
I promise, I'll be coming home to you