04-25-2017, 10:51 AM
A magic lantern moon rose up.
It’s shining through the trees
She glances back into my eye;
She knows that she is free.
A whisper flying through the leaves
Alights upon a stump
She gives a nice big grin and says
“I wouldn’t give you up!”
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I laughed and cried and fell apart
She caught my pieces, made an art
Inlay, filigree, golden lines
Only she had read the signs.
It’s shining through the trees
She glances back into my eye;
She knows that she is free.
A whisper flying through the leaves
Alights upon a stump
She gives a nice big grin and says
“I wouldn’t give you up!”
---
I laughed and cried and fell apart
She caught my pieces, made an art
Inlay, filigree, golden lines
Only she had read the signs.
(04-23-2017, 03:01 PM)CPsSecretLover Wrote: Wow. That is gorgeous imagery. This is what love looks like, folks.
(04-25-2017, 12:19 AM)Gentian Wrote: I need to echo CP'sSL here, gorgeous imagery. The first two lines in particular.I intended it to be an exercise in metaphorical imagery, so thanks for bringing that up!
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She is no lofty goal.
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She is no lofty goal.
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