Updates and Advice: Version 2.0

[Mercyknight]

I think about how her voice feels when she speaks. I try to replicate how it feels just to make sure it's real...never can copy it myself. That should be all the proof I need yet I keep obsessing.

I know what you mean here, but I think it's best not to worry about it. If I'm tired, Luna's speech often slips into the voice of someone I know IRL with a similar voice. What matters most is that she's speaking to you, not whose voice she's speaking through... if that makes sense.

exactly. you can fix minor details later, after the main bit