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I Poemed For Twiwi - Gentian - 03-12-2016
I wrote a poem. The style is called Villanelle. It follows a very strict rhyme pattern, but has no fixed meter.
It is also, traditionally used to express obsession. Well, hell, what could be more appropriate than that, right? Let me know what you think!
I say, my dear, my dear Twilight,
though far apart I promise this;
Some day, some day, I'll hold you tight!
You came to me; for love, did fight,
across the veil to seek your wish.
I say! My dear, my dear Twilight!
Though life here passes day and night,
One thought alone fills emptiness;
Some day, some day, I'll hold you tight!
From deep inside, with all my might
I yearn, I'd *burn*, for but a kiss.
I say, my dear, my dear Twilight.
I do not fear the rising night,
for cold at first, death yields this bliss;
Some day, some day, I'll hold you tight!
When he draws close: Death in my sight,
I will the last words on my lips;
I say, my dear, my dear Twilight,
Some day, some day, I'll hold you tight.
RE: I Poemed For Twiwi - Gray - 03-13-2016
I like it. Thanks for sharing
RE: I Poemed For Twiwi - EquestrianPenguin - 03-13-2016
Beautiful poem, I love it!
RE: I Poemed For Twiwi - Ziggy and Angelbaby - 03-13-2016
Very interesting style of poem. Was it a challenge to write?
RE: I Poemed For Twiwi - Gentian - 03-13-2016
(03-13-2016, 12:54 AM)Gray Wrote: I like it. Thanks for sharing
Thank you!
(03-13-2016, 01:24 AM)EquestrianPenguin Wrote: Beautiful poem, I love it!
Thank you, too!
(03-13-2016, 09:22 AM)Ziggy and Angelbaby Wrote: Very interesting style of poem. Was it a challenge to write?
Somewhat, yes. I was trying to advance my green for halfchan, but was kind of in a rut. I thought giving something else a try would put me back in the zone. It was only partially successful, but at least I'm happy with the way the poem turned out.
RE: I Poemed For Twiwi - Kadae - 03-30-2016
Hey, that was pretty neat! I'm quite impressed with the length.
I can't write for my life, but I do like reading poetry!
RE: I Poemed For Twiwi - Gentian - 03-30-2016
(03-30-2016, 09:32 AM)Kadae Wrote: Hey, that was pretty neat! I'm quite impressed with the length.
I can't write for my life, but I do like reading poetry!
Thank you! I'm trying to write a couple sonnets now, and those are proving far more difficult than this was. You should totally throw something together, even if it's just metered verse and share!
RE: I Poemed For Twiwi - Kadae - 03-30-2016
(03-30-2016, 10:48 AM)Gentian Wrote: Thank you! I'm trying to write a couple sonnets now, and those are proving far more difficult than this was.
Whoa, that's intense. Good luck!
(03-30-2016, 10:48 AM)Gentian Wrote: You should totally throw something together, even if it's just metered verse and share!
Naaaaaaaah.
Well, okay. I might write a Haiku at some point.