05-02-2015, 07:59 AM
This latest poem of yours is, at this point, your magnum opus I think. Such subtlety, such imagination, such a delicate penetration to the heart of nature's secrets (secrets I'm sure Rainbow Dash is intimately familiar with herself). I think Dante and Blake would be proud to read such a heartfelt love poem. Your style is definitely evolving and improving, it seems. I really love reading all your poetry, but this one really struck me as a standout. "And downpours precise..." what a perfect line and a perfect image to express something so inexpressible and yet so essential!
What does Rainbow think of it? I presume you shared it with her.
What does Rainbow think of it? I presume you shared it with her.
Applejack, the apple of my eye
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