Songs of Harmony/Songs of Discord

[Sentimental Gentleman]

A poem written around an ecstasy I experienced while out with my darling tonight. It's a rather ugly work at the moment, but as of yet I have no idea how to bring it together into some more pleasing form.

Guillotine moon
Stay your trembling execution
Until the sun has been
Doused in her eyes

Reveling stars
Your drunken shine
Shall never cross
Our dream

Silken night
Unspool yourself not
For I am the only thread
On the spindle of her lips