03-13-2016, 10:52 AM
(03-13-2016, 12:54 AM)Gray Wrote: I like it. Thanks for sharing
Thank you!
(03-13-2016, 01:24 AM)EquestrianPenguin Wrote: Beautiful poem, I love it!
Thank you, too!
(03-13-2016, 09:22 AM)Ziggy and Angelbaby Wrote: Very interesting style of poem. Was it a challenge to write?
Somewhat, yes. I was trying to advance my green for halfchan, but was kind of in a rut. I thought giving something else a try would put me back in the zone. It was only partially successful, but at least I'm happy with the way the poem turned out.
Don't hesitate to AM(A)A
The bigger you build the bonfire, the more darkness is revealed.
Every possession and every happiness is but lent by chance for an uncertain time, and may therefore be demanded back the next hour.
The bigger you build the bonfire, the more darkness is revealed.
Every possession and every happiness is but lent by chance for an uncertain time, and may therefore be demanded back the next hour.